yeah blame the website...
Woah, no hate is needed please :\ Just being civil here, jeez...
very good. Althought obviously not original. Some people are just stupid, e.g. LazyBucks. 5/5
I read the reviews below and I know that the only thing that made them sad was the music, they may not know themselves.. anyway. The art was OK, the story it was trying to teach was IMO silly but the animation was good, a bit boring at parts no offence.
Overall Good work, compared to soe of the other crap in the portal. ;)
Everything in this dream up to him looking back at where the guards were while he was in the forest was in a dream I had many years ago. Maybe there were differencdes but it was very similar. wow
It loops which is bad, just put stop(); in the actions panel (F9) at the end with a END text.
very bad lipsyncing. Try to split the recordings up into a few different recordings and animate it to lip sync its easier.
The art of pretty scruffy, especially since theres not much art in it at al so next time try harder. I dont get why the friend walked out. Overall, much better than most crap, so 4/5 8/10.
Thanks man. Yeah, I'm still figuring out all the commands and all in flash. The friend is the one getting the bj.
This seems like it could become something much better. If you develop a story or plot, an example is the mouse escapes and runs through foliage being chased by this owl or something along those lines. At the end it seemed like it became VERY slow and laggy? IDK if it was just lag or the frames getting further and further apart? maybe increase frame rate a tad? But yeah as I said, it's a good idea to develop your ideas and redevelop the new ideas to create something larger. This animation has a beginning, no real middle and no ending, just a fade to black, so try to create something with a begginning a middle and an end and you'lle be a winner. :) 4/5 (better than most of the crap in this flash portal)
Although I would be better if Gordon fought more because it randomly splits in half and is short, good animation though, smooth. I wonder if we will ever be able to attack an advisor with a crowbar? probably not.
Short, unoriginal, bland.
Next time think of a story, add a background + better art(guns etc) and make it much longer.
Not as bad as some stickmen movies though.
Can't agree with you more, I did that on porpouse..
that was long and funny, bet you put a lot of effort into it!
anyway, I got to the end and clicked MENU button before I saw the bonus password at the bottom. :/
...Watch it again! :P
Or just go Scene Select, whatever. :3
I just saw the [grey] one and thats good too. btw definetly make more, some calm ones, and some more aggressive ones would be good.
A good feature would be if you could click squares to make notes yourself! :D
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